This Ring of Ours
that I wear everywhere
could slip from my finger
at the slightest pull. What
keeps it in place
is my love for you. May love
ever brighten your face.
Your love for me
I wear everywhere
for everyone to see. May it
radiate from me
at the slightest pull.
May it stay forever
in place, embraced
everywhere
by my love for you.
And anchored in love
for as long as we live
with this ring of ours.
(Previously published in Verse-Virtual)
that I wear everywhere
could slip from my finger
at the slightest pull. What
keeps it in place
is my love for you. May love
ever brighten your face.
Your love for me
I wear everywhere
for everyone to see. May it
radiate from me
at the slightest pull.
May it stay forever
in place, embraced
everywhere
by my love for you.
And anchored in love
for as long as we live
with this ring of ours.
(Previously published in Verse-Virtual)
James Keane lives in northern New Jersey USA with his wife
and son and a menagerie of merry pets. In 2013, his first poetry chapbook, What
Comes Next, was published by Finishing Line Press. His poems have appeared
recently in the Indiana Voice Journal, Verse-Virtual,
The Bond Street Review, the Wilderness House Literary Review, the Tipton
Poetry Journal, the Blue Monday Review, the
Firewords Quarterly, the East Coast Literary Review, and
Contemporary American Voices. In addition, he still can’t cook to save his
life.
Dear James,
ReplyDeleteJust love the flow of this poem as well as its timeless message. This poem lives up to Ezra Pound's dictum, "the best words in the best order".
Thank you, James!
Michael
Thank you very much, Michael.
DeleteLovely, Jim. Thanks so much.
ReplyDeleteYou're quite welcome, Neil.
DeleteDear James,
ReplyDeleteIt's good to see you already have comments on your lovely poem. I hope you enjoy your time spent with us.
Blessings,
Karen
I'm sure I will, Karen. Thank you.
DeleteCordially,
Jim
Beautiful. In awe of the emotions radiating from your poem, "This Ring of Ours," James. Thank you for sharing it and continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Thank you, Maurice. And blessings to you in this holiday season.
DeleteJim,
ReplyDeleteA great poem. Welcome to Whispers!
Your new friend,
David Fox
Thank you very much, David.
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