Tuesday, January 31, 2017

Alice--By Laurie Nguyen (Robin Goodfellow)--United States

Alice

Lovely whispers embrace soft
rays of sunlight. Quiet, playful
cries come through the sounds
as lullabies sooth children's
fragile fingers. Gripping stems and
leaves, they flew by, strands of
honeydew glistening upon the
afternoon light, paper airplanes
bashfully lingering near. Scents
of glue and cookies sweep
through the air, kissing lightly 
the sweet scent of sugar and tea 
and anything else that would 
have adults

sigh

nostalgically.

Laurie Nguyen (Robin Goodfellow) is a student at the University of North Texas. She first became interested in writing when she was three, scribbling all over her parents' walls and imagining herself in old fairytales while walking in her father's garden. Since then, she has published poems in the online magazine, Nature Writing, as well as the Haiku Journal and the Healing Poetry

6 comments:

  1. Dear Laurie,
    I like your use of "s" sounds in this poem. They create a delightful read.
    Blessings,
    Michael

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  2. Dear Laurie,

    It's good to see you have a lovely comment from Michael on you poem. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Happy Writing!

    Blessings,
    Karen

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  3. Laure,
    Loved this especially the lines: "through the air kissing lightly the sweet scent of sugar and tea.
    ~Davidf

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  4. So exquisitely beautiful Laurie! What a gift you have!

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  5. I enjoyed reading this written gem Laurie. I loved the description of smells, lullabies, and sighting of honeydew glistening.
    Yancy

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