Friday, January 13, 2017

Postcard View--By Paul Callus--Malta

Postcard View (Acrostic)

Proudly she stands on slopes covered in snow
One graceful woodland deer her eyes aglow
She strikes a pose unmoving, head held high
Twitching her ears as flapping birds go by.
Catching the light of early morning sun
Across the stream reflected colours run.
Right by the lake the drifting mist lies low
Deliberating: should it stay or go?

Voraciously I feast on nature’s fare
Intense the bliss which fills my heart and soul
Ethereal the mood that tempts to share
With my obliging muse...she makes me whole.

 Paul Callus is a Maltese author who writes both in Maltese and English. He has contributed to several anthologies. Apart from poetry he writes lyrics for songs and has published two books, one a story book aimed at children (related to his experience as a teacher) and a historical book based on research.
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10 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 14, 2017 at 9:37 AM

    Dear Paul,
    This poem of nature is so enjoyable and fun to read. Love the way you've used the acrostic model so effectively.
    Blessings,
    Michael

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  2. paul callusJanuary 15, 2017 at 7:16 AM

    Many thanks, Michael. Your lovely feedback is appreciated. Regards & Blessings // paul

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  3. UnknownJanuary 15, 2017 at 12:42 PM

    Hi Paul,
    I loved this beautiful Praise of the joy of nature. I felt that I was right beside her, great descriptions.
    Yvonne

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    1. paul callusFebruary 28, 2017 at 11:02 AM

      Thank you Yvonne; your feedback is a delight to read! Best regards ~ paul

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  4. David FoxJanuary 16, 2017 at 8:33 AM

    Paul,
    You did an excellent job on this acrostic. It is hard to make them rhyme, but you did it so well.
    Your friend,
    Davidf

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    1. paul callusFebruary 28, 2017 at 11:04 AM

      Thank you for the lovely and encouraging comments, David. Best regards, my friend...paul

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2017 at 1:05 PM

    A beautiful "Postcard View," Paul. A beautiful poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. paul callusFebruary 28, 2017 at 11:05 AM

      I'm so pleased that you found beauty in this Acrostic, Maurice. Thank you for stopping by. Regards & Blessings ~ paul

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  6. UnknownMarch 10, 2017 at 1:53 PM

    Very astute writing Paul, all from a "Postcard View"
    You are very sharp. The details you exact from
    a card, makes me wish I'd paid more attention
    When I had real live views. Thanks for
    sharing this precious Jewel
    Yancy

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  7. paul callusMarch 30, 2017 at 6:21 AM

    Many thanks for stopping by, Yancy. Your meaningful feedback and support are appreciated. Regards // paul

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