Daughter
Moving
The days when we would
happily bounce around town together are long gone. Now we get brief
snippets of time we gobble up like hungry beasts. Then we return to the
rhythm of long-distance phone calls and occasional four-day visits in whatever
town you call home. We manage to keep our bond tight knowing we are both
where we need to be, doing what we need to be doing. But today, packing
up the car once again, I find myself aching for some of those carefree moments
of youth we once shared. I would love to hear the clip-clop of plastic heels on
the kitchen floor just one more time and catch a glimpse of days long past when
we strode side by side effortlessly, smiles broad and free.
last dish in the cupboard
dreaded farewell upon us
smell of fresh paint in every corner
Dear Peggy,
ReplyDeleteI love the way your poems hit us where we live. This one exemplifies that tendency.
Thank you,
Michael
Dear Michel,
DeleteThank you so much for your kind words, I apprecaite them so much.
Best Regards,
Peggy
I am moved. I can smell the paint...see the cupboard...and my gut tenses at the dreaded farewell. Thank you, Peg.
ReplyDeleteThank you Fran, glad I could move you with my words!!!!
DeletePeggy,
ReplyDeleteThese memories remind me of the old song "Those Were the days" It starts off: "Those were the days my friend, we thought they'd never end, we'd sing and dance forever and a day..." Don't remember the rest, but you might be able to find it on the Internet if you don't remember the song. (I don't even know who sang it, we learned in chorus class, way back when I was ion grammar school...
?Yours truly,
David Fox
Thanks David, I remember the song...best to you. Peggy
DeletePeggy, the whole piece is beautiful. What especially made my heart jump was the clip clop of heals, those plastic get ups for queens and princesses, that brought a flood of memories of Sierra in a crown. well said my friend!
ReplyDeleteDebbie
Thanks Deb, ah yes….the princess days, weren’t they super special for the girls and us! Thanks for the kind words :)
DeleteNow this touches home with me. I like the prose setting and especially that you end the poem with 3 lines of imagery of feelings.
ReplyDeleteThanks Barbara for your kind words, so glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteYour work conveys a strong sense of nostalgia. It's beautiful. This is something like a haibun.
ReplyDeleteThank you Martha! Glad you enjoyed it!
Deleteas always, the bestest from peggy dugan french...
ReplyDeletethank you so much ayaz….
DeleteVery good Peggy, I relate more to this by watching my mother and three sisters, brining to mind many comical memories. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteYancy
Thanks for your kind words Yancy.
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