Isolde - Your Gifts to Me
You give to me that streak of dawn which shies
away the shrouds,
A flight upon a feather's back beneath the
breath of clouds,
An image of an elfin boy found prancing
through the crowds
You lead me by the hand through nights into
the waking days,
Through swinging gates in mirrored walls and
through the midnight haze,
Through castles built in sandbox realms in
children’s yesterdays
You give to me a silver flute, a whistle on a
chain,
A drummer boy with dancing feet, a sugar candy
cane,
A window flushed of foolish tears with
pitter-patter rain
You whisk me from a valley deep wherein a
black wind blows,
And tracks upon the empty sands are hidden by
the snows,
And share with me your secret thoughts and
steal away my woes
You give to me a penny plain to cast upon a
dream,
A falling star upon the sky, a bridge across a
stream,
A teddy bear with tattered ears and berries
dipped in cream
You give to me in winter’s chill your ragged
scarf of thread,
A blazing ball of candle wax, a fire dripping
red
Embracing me (your rhyming clown with yearning
arms outspread)
In flames of love forevermore with nothing
left unsaid
Terry O’Leary
defines himself as "A physicist
lacking gravity..."
Dear Terry,
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the most rhythmic poems I've ever read. You're using a 14 syllable line throughout that is quite pleasurable to read. I must learn more about this form. Very nicely done.
Michael
Terry, you have the most distinctive and recognizable styles at Whispers. Love this beautifully crafted piece with the sand box of our yesterday years! Ralph
ReplyDeleteTerry, thank you for sharig this piece with us, I enjoyed it.
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ReplyDeleteDear Terry, after looking up Isolde and a few words that go with it, I really enjoyed this well thought out poem. I also love that you are a "A physicist lacking gravity..." Choice unique comical words. Thanks for sharing.
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