Immersion*
I
rise
and dwell,
mingling mute,
in the world’s beauty.
The cumulus clouds wave over
the field until the tide changes, and the moon’s light shines.
*(Poetry Form--Fibonacci)
Karen O’Leary is a writer and editor from West Fargo, ND. She has published poetry, short stories, and articles in a variety of venues including, Frogpond, A Hundred Gourds, bear creek haiku, Shemom, Creative Inspirations and NeverEnding Story. Karen is our Whispers’ editor. She enjoys sharing the gift of words.
Dear Inge,
ReplyDeleteThank you for accepting my words for your individual poem opportunity. You are a wonderful editor filled with insight and perspective. It makes you a good friend too.
Blessings always,
Karen
Dear Karen,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy working with you and Jack. Your Fibonacci poem is a wonderful composition which slowly evolves to a beautiful end, considering the rules for this poetry form I think you created a great poem.
Best wishes,
Inge
Dear Inge,
DeleteThank you so much for your kind words and for all your encouragement you give to me and others here at Whispers. I am grateful you agreed to publish this poem for our online journal.
Blessings and best wishes,
Karen
Thanks for sharing this piece Karen, I really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteDear Peggy,
DeleteWhat a joy you are to me and so many others with your encouragement and support. I wish you the best always, my friend.
Blessings,
Karen
love this heartfelt & beautiful poem xx
ReplyDeleteDear Jack,
DeleteThank you for your kind words, my friend. Your encouragement and support mean a lot to me.
Blessings,
Karen
A beautiful poem and a form perfectly executed, Karen. The final two lines really appeal to me. Blessings ~ paul
ReplyDeleteDear Paul,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words. You continued encouragement are such a blessing, my friend.
Best wishes always,
Karen
What a beautiful poem Karen. I've rarely written this form; so few words say so much and I love those final two lines:-) love Jan x
ReplyDeleteDear Jan,
DeleteThank you so much for your kind words. I hope share some of your writing in the months to come. Best wishes always!
Blessings,
Karen
The kind of immersion in the beauty I enjoy Karen.
ReplyDeleteVery unique & good writhing
Knight Writer
Dear Yancy,
DeleteThank you for these lovely comments. It is so good to you have you back at Whispers--sharing one of your mothers and yours this month.
Blessings,
Karen