Iris is unique
controlling Pupils ways
Discerning light reaching
Retina
through her aperture displays
Window on the world
perceiving what's revealed
Relaying back to the mind
Seeing what’s concealed
To organise identify and
interpret
how in given environment it
will fit
Anna-Marie Docherty lives in
Pembrokeshire, Wales, UK and is often inspired by nature and the world around
her. Having been writing poetry now for 4 - 5 years, her works have developed
in structure and form as well as using free verse in her writing as she walks
this endless art form and creativity.
I love this clever use of personification for the eye
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jack, such a pleasure to see you here, appreciated.
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ReplyDeleteI agree with Jack, I especially like 'Window on the World'
Very creative write. Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes,
Inge
I was thinking in todays world of technology just how far and wide the eyes can actually see and what a loss it would be without... so kind of you and great to see you here.
DeleteI think of this quote, "the eyes are the windows to the soul". Thank you for your unique poem. How we each view life is unique in every way. That is why we must not judge because we cannot always see the souls of others. We are only called to love and I love your poem.
ReplyDeleteSincerley, Charlene
Interesting, thank you for coming by such a pleasure to see you.
ReplyDeleteVery good Anna Marie,
ReplyDeleteI like how you cover eye use, seeing how one could write a whole book about it & not say anymore. Great Job.
Knight Writer
Thankyou for your thoughts and coming by to read/comment. Much appreciated and hope to see you again.
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