Saudade
#1
At first the distant
mountain-tops
Fade into the coming rain
cloud
And then the hills nearer to
My village draw their misty
veil.
At last it pours over my
home.
Silent's the square, empty
the shops,
The street's bereft of all
its crowd
Excepting for the luckless
few
Who seek shelter to no avail.
At last it pours over my
home.
Thus freed from care about
their crops
That bloom and thrive under
the shroud
My village came to life anew.
Their joyous shouts do ring
out loud
- But I have strayed from all
I knew
Accursed to roam from vale to
vale.
Though I regret all that I
threw
There is one reason not to
wail -
At last it pours over my
home.
Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
moonlights as an award-winning copywriter by day and daylights as an
award-wanting poet by night. He thinks he is funny, but his friends vehemently
disagree.
Saudade is a deep emotional state of nostalgic or profound melancholic longing for an absent something or someone that one loves.
ReplyDeleteNicely done dak poem,Raamesh ,Karen,best wishes angelee
Thank you so much, Angelee.
DeleteNicely done. I visualized everything you wrote. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteNicely done. I visualized everything you wrote. Thanks!
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DeleteRaamesh, thank you for sharing "Saudade #1 " with us. I enjoyed it. Continued blessings!
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Thank you so much! This means much to me.
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