Langley Shazor, a
talented writer, graciously offered to be the activity editor for June. He selected—Alliteration--“the repetition of
usually initial consonant sounds in two or more neighboring words or syllables
(as wild and woolly, threatening throngs)”--Definition courtesy of
Merriam-Webster Dictionary. It adds a rhythmic
feel to poetic lines.
The Exercise—Langley
invited readers to share in his challenge, an open themed four-line poem, with
a singular subject or thought. Each line using a different letter or sound. No
word count or syllable count restrictions. Writers were asked to title their
poems.
What a wonderful
response! I would like to thank Langley for his efforts to bring so many writers
together. I am grateful to all the poets
that contributed to this column. If you
missed the deadline, you can add poems in the comments section.
--Karen
O’Leary, Whispers’ Editor
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Scintillating Snowflakes
Wintry white wisps wondrously whirl
Soft sparkling snowflakes silently swirl
Coolly carpeting countrysides carefully
Dazzling diamonds dancing delightfully
By Jan Allison
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Backyard Praise
Sun-facing spiderworts parade in purple.
Tulips tease teacup roses; petunias
planted in rainbow rows primp and pamper.
Lilies lift liquid lines aloft.
By Michael Escoubas
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A Special Girl
Bright bubbly boisterous
Peppy pretty young thing
Always alights a
Feeling of fury
By David Fox
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Fickle Friend
Changes cut connections:
a friendship forgotten
and lustful lover lost;
abandoned, avoided...angry!
By Jack Horne
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Transformation Awakening
Silence speaks softly, surely
Paralleling promises, provoking peace
As authenticity and autonomy awaken
Beginning, blossoming, beholding beauty.
By Rebekah Townsend
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Vernal Equinox
Birches broken by bright brittle ice
have fallen to the forest floor;
the wind whispers words of wise comfort
to me: green grows again, greet great spring.
By Kelley White
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Country Roads
Sandy, soft, sacred soil savored
Calm, cool, canopied, carefree place
Picturesque painting a panacea
Luminous, luculent road lumbering home
By Sara Kendrick
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Dog Days
Happy humble hummingbird
busy bumble bee
Summer sunshine sparkles
through the tulip tree.
By Barbara Tate
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A Wicked Winter
Suspended snow, sprinkled like salt
collects in craters and cradled
by frozen files of fir trees, far
too harsh for human habitation.
By Annie Jenkin
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Wagon Train
Wooden wagon wheels wobbling
Sometimes skidding side to side
Abruptly alerting an avalanche
Perching proudly, but precipitously
By Elizabeth Howard
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Om Mane Padme Hum
Opening over October's orations
My meditations merging into Mandalas -
Prayers persist in perpetual pleading
He in his heavens hears, He in his heavens hears
By Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
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Folk Music
Treasured tunes
gather generations ~~
singing soul songs,
making memories
By Karen O'Leary
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For the Forty-Nine
Gunned down and gay,
the pride of "Pulse".
Let there be love.
Together today
By Ralph Stott
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Moonlight
Mirrored madness, should we mourn?
Solemn, standing on a suspended sky
Pure and proud, perhaps we should praise?
Breathless, broken, and yet utterly beautiful.
By Anna Broyles
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The Big Day
Lily lined lace covers lashes
Ebony engulfed elegance
Sentinels stand stoic and still
The calm convergence of connectedness
By Langley Shazor
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I can't thank you all enough for participating in this activity. The honor is truly mine. Keep up the good words!!!!
ReplyDeleteDear Langley,
DeleteThank you for coming up with this creative idea which so many have enjoyed and are enjoying as readers. I appreciate all the hard work you put into this column.
Blessings,
Karen
It is amazing how such a simple construction of words wisely and thoughtfully compiled gives such delight. Well done everybody and thank you.
ReplyDeleteDear Annie,
DeleteI agree with you. Langley came up with an idea that was a joy for people to try. I am amazed at all the people participating in this activity. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, rich in imagery.
Blessings,
Karen
Thanks for setting us the challenge Langley:-) Jan xx
ReplyDeleteDear Jan,
DeleteThank you for sharing in this creative activity with your lovely poem. Kudos to Langley for coming up with the idea and for his hard work on the column. Best wishes!
Blessings,
Karen
This was fun. Thank you Langley.
ReplyDeleteDear Barbara,
DeleteYes, I am grateful to Langley for his efforts to bring us this delightful activity. Thank you so much for participating.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you for all the good reading tonight, and to Langley for suggesting the activity. Very enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteDear Mary Jo,
DeleteThank you for your kind words. I agree with you that Langley came up with a delightful idea for writers and readers to enjoy.
Blessings,
Karen
All the short poem using alliteration were excellent examples and great reading. I especially liked moonlight. Thanks Langley
ReplyDeleteDear JT,
DeleteI am grateful to Langley for sharing this activity. Thank you for your kind words and gratitude for Langley's efforts to bring us this wonderful column.
Blessings,
Karen
Alliteration is immensely important when composing our poems--this activity has been both fun and informative.--Thanks Langley
ReplyDeleteDear Michael,
DeleteI totally agree with you. In addition to providing a fun activity, Langley chose an activity that people can learn from. Kudos and gratitude, Langley!
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you all for your gracious words. Please accept my sincerest apology for any errors that were committed while compiling everyone's works.
ReplyDeleteDear Langley,
DeleteThank you for sharing this wonderful column for Whispers readers to enjoy. Kudos!
Blessings,
Karen
The poems are all wonderful. Thank you Langley for an enjoyable read.
ReplyDeleteCharlene
Dear Charlene,
DeleteI agree. Thank you for stopping by to congratulate Langley and the contributors of this column. I enjoyed reading the poems, too.
Blessings,
Karen
These are all wonderful renderings of this genre of poetry. Elaine
ReplyDeleteDear Elaine,
DeleteThank you for your kind words. Langley came up with this creative idea that many are enjoying. Kudos Langley!
Blessings,
Karen
Breathtaking. What a joy to be a part of this community. Great job, everyone. Continued blessings to you all!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Dear Maurice,
DeleteThank you for your lovely words. It is a joy to have you a part of our community. Yes, Langley chose a creative idea and put together this wonderful collection of poetry. Glad you enjoyed the poems.
Blessings,
Karen
I didn't get the chance to participate this time but I so enjoyed all of these remarkable offerings. Thank you! Blessings, Connie
ReplyDeleteDear Connie,
DeleteThank you for your kind words and for all the support and encouragement you give to others here at Whispers and in the writing community as a whole.
Blessings and best wishes,
Karen
It was joy both to participate in the activity and to read the submissions. What fun!
ReplyDeleteDear Raamesh,
DeleteThank you for sharing your talent for this column and for Whispers in general, too. I appreciate your kind words.
Blessings,
Karen