Wednesday, June 22, 2016

WHISPERS’ JUNE ACTIVITY—THE ART OF ALLITERATION

Langley Shazor, a talented writer, graciously offered to be the activity editor for June.  He selected—Alliteration--“the repetition of usually initial consonant sounds in two or more neighboring words or syllables (as wild and woolly, threatening throngs)”--Definition courtesy of Merriam-Webster Dictionary.  It adds a rhythmic feel to poetic lines.

The Exercise—Langley invited readers to share in his challenge, an open themed four-line poem, with a singular subject or thought. Each line using a different letter or sound. No word count or syllable count restrictions. Writers were asked to title their poems.

What a wonderful response! I would like to thank Langley for his efforts to bring so many writers together.  I am grateful to all the poets that contributed to this column.  If you missed the deadline, you can add poems in the comments section.

                                       --Karen O’Leary, Whispers’ Editor
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Scintillating Snowflakes

Wintry white wisps wondrously whirl
Soft sparkling snowflakes silently swirl
Coolly carpeting countrysides carefully
Dazzling diamonds dancing delightfully

By Jan Allison
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Backyard Praise

Sun-facing spiderworts parade in purple.
Tulips tease teacup roses; petunias
planted in rainbow rows primp and pamper.
Lilies lift liquid lines aloft.

By Michael Escoubas
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A Special Girl

Bright bubbly boisterous
Peppy pretty young thing
Always alights a
Feeling of fury

By David Fox
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Fickle Friend

Changes cut connections:
a friendship forgotten
and lustful lover lost;
abandoned, avoided...angry!

By Jack Horne
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Transformation Awakening

Silence speaks softly, surely
Paralleling promises, provoking peace
As authenticity and autonomy awaken
Beginning, blossoming, beholding beauty.

By Rebekah Townsend
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Vernal Equinox

Birches broken by bright brittle ice
have fallen to the forest floor;
the wind whispers words of wise comfort
to me: green grows again, greet great spring.

By Kelley White
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Country Roads

Sandy, soft, sacred soil savored
Calm, cool, canopied, carefree place
Picturesque painting a panacea
Luminous, luculent road lumbering home

By Sara Kendrick
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Dog Days

Happy humble hummingbird
busy bumble bee
Summer sunshine sparkles
through the tulip tree.

By Barbara Tate
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A Wicked Winter

Suspended snow, sprinkled like salt
collects in craters and cradled
by frozen files of fir trees, far
too harsh for human habitation.

By Annie Jenkin
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Wagon Train

Wooden wagon wheels wobbling
Sometimes skidding side to side
Abruptly alerting an avalanche
Perching proudly, but precipitously

By Elizabeth Howard
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Om Mane Padme Hum

Opening over October's orations
My meditations merging into Mandalas -
Prayers persist in perpetual pleading
He in his heavens hears, He in his heavens hears

By Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
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Folk Music

Treasured tunes
gather generations ~~
singing soul songs,
making memories

By Karen O'Leary
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For the Forty-Nine

Gunned down and gay,
the pride of "Pulse".
Let there be love.
Together today

By Ralph Stott
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Moonlight

Mirrored madness, should we mourn?
Solemn, standing on a suspended sky
Pure and proud, perhaps we should praise?
Breathless, broken, and yet utterly beautiful.

By Anna Broyles
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The Big Day

Lily lined lace covers lashes
Ebony engulfed elegance
Sentinels stand stoic and still
The calm convergence of connectedness

By Langley Shazor
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26 comments:

  1. I can't thank you all enough for participating in this activity. The honor is truly mine. Keep up the good words!!!!

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    1. Dear Langley,

      Thank you for coming up with this creative idea which so many have enjoyed and are enjoying as readers. I appreciate all the hard work you put into this column.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  2. It is amazing how such a simple construction of words wisely and thoughtfully compiled gives such delight. Well done everybody and thank you.

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    1. Dear Annie,

      I agree with you. Langley came up with an idea that was a joy for people to try. I am amazed at all the people participating in this activity. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, rich in imagery.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  3. Thanks for setting us the challenge Langley:-) Jan xx

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    1. Dear Jan,

      Thank you for sharing in this creative activity with your lovely poem. Kudos to Langley for coming up with the idea and for his hard work on the column. Best wishes!

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  4. This was fun. Thank you Langley.

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    1. Dear Barbara,

      Yes, I am grateful to Langley for his efforts to bring us this delightful activity. Thank you so much for participating.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  5. Thank you for all the good reading tonight, and to Langley for suggesting the activity. Very enjoyable.

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    1. Dear Mary Jo,

      Thank you for your kind words. I agree with you that Langley came up with a delightful idea for writers and readers to enjoy.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  6. All the short poem using alliteration were excellent examples and great reading. I especially liked moonlight. Thanks Langley

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    1. Dear JT,

      I am grateful to Langley for sharing this activity. Thank you for your kind words and gratitude for Langley's efforts to bring us this wonderful column.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  7. Alliteration is immensely important when composing our poems--this activity has been both fun and informative.--Thanks Langley

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    1. Dear Michael,

      I totally agree with you. In addition to providing a fun activity, Langley chose an activity that people can learn from. Kudos and gratitude, Langley!

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  8. Thank you all for your gracious words. Please accept my sincerest apology for any errors that were committed while compiling everyone's works.

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    1. Dear Langley,

      Thank you for sharing this wonderful column for Whispers readers to enjoy. Kudos!

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  9. The poems are all wonderful. Thank you Langley for an enjoyable read.
    Charlene

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    1. Dear Charlene,

      I agree. Thank you for stopping by to congratulate Langley and the contributors of this column. I enjoyed reading the poems, too.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  10. These are all wonderful renderings of this genre of poetry. Elaine

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    1. Dear Elaine,

      Thank you for your kind words. Langley came up with this creative idea that many are enjoying. Kudos Langley!

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  11. Breathtaking. What a joy to be a part of this community. Great job, everyone. Continued blessings to you all!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. Dear Maurice,

      Thank you for your lovely words. It is a joy to have you a part of our community. Yes, Langley chose a creative idea and put together this wonderful collection of poetry. Glad you enjoyed the poems.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  12. I didn't get the chance to participate this time but I so enjoyed all of these remarkable offerings. Thank you! Blessings, Connie

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    1. Dear Connie,

      Thank you for your kind words and for all the support and encouragement you give to others here at Whispers and in the writing community as a whole.

      Blessings and best wishes,
      Karen

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  13. It was joy both to participate in the activity and to read the submissions. What fun!

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    1. Dear Raamesh,

      Thank you for sharing your talent for this column and for Whispers in general, too. I appreciate your kind words.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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