mosaic of dreams and hope
if restlessness never ceases
in the soul
how do we know when the
circle of youth is complete -
at what age are we defined
as old
old enough to die?
life and love - an exciting
epoch
beautiful, like flowers in
springtime
but they never last without
rain
and weather in storms
endless graveyards are built
by man -
some are parthenons for the
dead
but what should be erected
for those
who are dead but still
exist?
let's build a mosaic of
dreams and hope
on a pedestal of non-death –
a catharsis - a jubilation
for being alive
Jeanette Nel le Roux lives in the tranquil town of Mossel Bay on the beautiful Garden Route in
South Africa since 1990. She is a real estate agent since 1976, divorced
in 2007, has 3 daughters and a son. Jeanette's
home language is Afrikaans, but she writes in both English and Afrikaans.
She has a poetry group on Facebook called "Jeanette Nel le Roux
Poetry". Jeanette seriously started writing poetry when her soulmate died in
2009. She is published in several poetry books, together with other
poets, but she will publish one of her own in the near future.
Dear Jeanette,
ReplyDeleteThe "Mosaic of dreams and hope" eqnites life back to an old
age question, "Is death the end of ones life?" I like
the Idea of non death. Perhaps thats the truth of
what is.
Yancy
Dear Jeanette,
ReplyDeleteI truly enjoyed your unique treatment of dreams and hope.
Thank you,
Michael
Enjoyed your piece very much, somethign to think about...
ReplyDeleteJeanette,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this very much. Can you recommend some South African/African websites that takes work from Americans?
Yours truly,
David Fox
A lovely piece of writing! Well put together. Love it ! Keith,UK.
ReplyDeleteJeanette, I love to say "Thank you" when I read something that makes me say "I wish I'd written that!"
ReplyDeleteThank you for "..a jubilation for being alive." That is marvelous poet talk.