Ode to a Willow Tree
Why do you weep O willow
tree?
Is it because you cannot
sleep?
I see your waves sway in the
wind
As I watch in awe.
I would love to swing on your
branches
But I am afraid you could not
sustain me.
You bear no fruit
But you are aesthetically
pleasing,
And that is enough for me.
David Fox has been published
in over 100 places, including journals, websites, newsletters, blogs, and
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Hello David
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed this as it is very timely - the trees are gorgeous this time of year and you have reminded us. Thank you, Annie
Dear David,
ReplyDeleteI like the way one can observe the beauty of something and be satisfied with that thing as it is.
Thank you,
Michael
Dear David,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this gem. I liked that the poem
was addressed to the subject you were writing about.
exceptionally said.
Yancy
Hi David . Such a simplistic piece , or so it seems . Then you use your skill as a Poet , to enlighten the readers mind and stimulate thought . Thank you for sharing . Allan .
ReplyDeleteAnnie,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the nice comment.
Yours truly,
David Fox
Michael,
ReplyDeleteYour comments always mean so much. Thank you.
Yours truly,
David Fox
Yancy,
ReplyDeleteI always try to keep my poems on topic. Thanks for noticing.
Yours truly,
David Fox
David, you are a very good writer and easy
Deleteand fun to read. Sincerely,
Yancy
Allan,
ReplyDeleteI truly believe simplistic poems can have a deeper meaning to them. Thanks for seeing it in this.
Yours truly,
David Fox
Some other poet (!) mentioned "a swinger of birches," and you remind us that it's possible to swing other trees, in other poetic ways...
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy reading poems with sense and not wrapped up in riddles, and this is one of them, David. I feel a tender, warm relationship between you and the willow tree, and by the end of the poem I sense a smile lighting her face! Regards // paul
ReplyDeleteRick (Richard Carl),
ReplyDeleteThanks for the compliment. I tried to make this poem like the children's story,"The Giving Tree" by Shel Silverstein. I'm not quite sure what type of tree he had in mind for that story, but after reading it, the Weeping Willow seemed to fit.
Your friend,
David Fox
Paul,
ReplyDeleteIt does almost seem like a smile should come to her "face". All of God's creatures just want to be appreciated I think.
Yours truly,
David Fox