Sunday, July 17, 2016

Haiku--By Muskaan Ahuja--India

see- saw swing -
     the ups and downs
     of my life
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smile -
     the curve of wrinkles
     on grandma's face
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Muskaan Ahuja is a student pursuing graduation in English honors.  She loves challenging herself and writing poetry. She considers haiku as her journey in three lines and aspires to become English professor. 
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16 comments:

  1. David FoxJuly 20, 2016 at 3:46 PM

    Muskaan,
    I like both of these a lot couldn't choose a favorite, they are both equally good. Good luck in becoming an English professor. Welcome to Whispers if you are new, still a warm welcome from me even if you are not.
    Your new friend,
    David Foz

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    1. David FoxJuly 20, 2016 at 3:50 PM

      That's Fox not, Foz, wasn't looking at the keyboard...

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    2. MuskaanJuly 30, 2016 at 10:10 AM

      Thankyou david for your wishes and appreciation!

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    3. MuskaanJuly 31, 2016 at 4:43 AM

      Thankyou david for your wishes and appreciation!

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  2. AnonymousJuly 21, 2016 at 9:19 AM

    I agree with David, Muskaan. Both haiku are beautifully written and expressive. I can certainly relate to the first one in my life, and the second paints a reminder of my paternal grandmother, who has passed away. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. MuskaanJuly 30, 2016 at 10:12 AM

      Thanks maurice for sharing your memory ! It feels really good when someone relates your work to a memory or moment in their life...

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    2. MuskaanJuly 31, 2016 at 4:43 AM

      Thanks maurice for sharing your memory ! It feels really good when someone relates your work to a memory or moment in their life...

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  3. pdfrenchJuly 21, 2016 at 5:31 PM

    i love both of these, thanks for sharing!

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    1. MuskaanJuly 30, 2016 at 10:12 AM

      Thnks peggy for always looking upto my poems and commenting!

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  4. UnknownJuly 30, 2016 at 10:47 AM

    Very nice.. keep going and writing like this. . We really enjoy. God bless u ☺

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    1. MuskaanJuly 31, 2016 at 6:37 AM

      Thnkyou so much for such kind words of encouragement!

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  5. UnknownJuly 30, 2016 at 10:48 AM

    Very nice.. keep going and writing like this. . We really enjoy. God bless u ☺

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  6. GAURAV MITTALJuly 30, 2016 at 11:04 AM

    Good going muskaan... Keep up the good work... Best of luck...

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  7. manvinderJuly 31, 2016 at 6:35 AM

    Nice haiku!really enjoyed.....

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