passing
from a window to another
these clouds…
how they enter in my room
between you and me
from a window to another
these clouds…
how they enter in my room
between you and me
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falling
from a jasmine to another
a dewdrop ...
I hold all seven colours
in my palm
from a jasmine to another
a dewdrop ...
I hold all seven colours
in my palm
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Archana Kapoor Nagpal is an
internationally published author of 6 books so far, and her winning stories are
now part of international anthologies. She writes inspirational content for
corporate newsletters, websites, blogs and print publications. Her
inspirational poems touch every area of a person's life. She enjoys writing
Haiku and Tanka as well. Visit her Amazon Author Profile to know more about her.
Masterly, especially reading them this early morning. Much enjoyed. Ralph
ReplyDeleteArchana,
ReplyDelete2 great tanka, the second one is my favorite. Good jon on both, though.
Your new friend,
David Fox
Thanks so much!
DeleteBeautiful writes, Archana. I enjoyed them, especially the second one. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Thanks so much!
DeleteBoth Tanka are beautiful, Archana, but what else can I expect from a talented writer like you! Regards // paul
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteSo are you Paul!
I really enjoyed your pieces!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteNice write, enjoyed your Tanka first time. But wow, found so touching. Accept complements from your new friend.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
Deletewow love the second one vert much and the first well done. Pete.
ReplyDeleteThey are verily so nice! Impressive!
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