her laughter
quicker than mine today …
a playful breeze
on our faces
as she pushes her walker
Ribbons journal, April 2015
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talk
of papal politics,
tea leaves and dreams ...
I wonder when
the rain will stop
A Hundred Gourds, September 2014
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at the art gallery
with an artist friend ...
I am seduced
by her explanation
of light and dark
hedgerow, #16, 2015
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Anne Curran is a Hamiltonian and New Zealander. She writes in awe and admiration of all those Japanese verse poets and editors who have encouraged her on this journey.
quicker than mine today …
a playful breeze
on our faces
as she pushes her walker
Ribbons journal, April 2015
________________
talk
of papal politics,
tea leaves and dreams ...
I wonder when
the rain will stop
A Hundred Gourds, September 2014
________________
at the art gallery
with an artist friend ...
I am seduced
by her explanation
of light and dark
hedgerow, #16, 2015
________________
Anne Curran is a Hamiltonian and New Zealander. She writes in awe and admiration of all those Japanese verse poets and editors who have encouraged her on this journey.
Your three Tanka's were so very personal and with real feelings of life. The last three lines of the last Tanks were beautiful.
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I especially liked the first tanka, Anne. :)
ReplyDeleteIntensely delicate! You will have me pondering,
ReplyDeletelight and dark, today! Much enjoyed. Ralph
Thanks for sharing your Tanka, Anne. I enjoyed them, especially that last one. Continued blessings!
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Such a delightful string of Tanka, Anne, especially the last one! Regards...paul
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed these very much!
ReplyDeleteDear Anne ,these are exquisite esp the first one ,love and light,angelee
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