still
there
the dust
on the sofa
i recall our
old memories
the dust
on the sofa
i recall our
old memories
_____________
walking
straight
with his thoughts
behind someone
a glimpse of
him
with his thoughts
behind someone
a glimpse of
him
_____________
Muskaan
Ahuja is a student pursuing graduation in English honors. She loves challenging herself and writing
poetry. She considers haiku as her journey in three lines and aspires to become
English professor.
Nice compositions, Muskaan. I wish you to read the beautiful Japanese short form of poems posted in different websites. For Tanka, please go through the classical archives at Aha Poetry and scholarly essay by Jane Reichhold.
ReplyDeleteMuskaan,
ReplyDeleteSome beautiful poetry here.
Your new friend,
David Fox
Thankyou david for always commenting upon my poems.
DeleteThankyou david for always commenting upon my poems.
DeleteWelldone Muskaan keep it up
ReplyDeleteThankyou
DeleteI enjoyed these!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!
DeleteMuskaan, I enjoyed your two selections, especially that second one. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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Thankyou for reading :)
DeleteI loved the first one :)
ReplyDeleteGreat attempt, Muskaan