Michael Escoubas, an accomplished writer, generously
agreed to be the activity editor for May.
He selected personification, an element in which poets assign human
characteristics to nonhuman subjects. It
adds a creative perspective to convey thoughts.
The Exercise--Write up to two poems from one to three lines that
contain at least one example of personification. Titles are welcome. Let the syllable
count range from 7 to 10. Underscore your personification.
What a wonderful response! I would like to thank
Michael for his efforts to bring so many writers together. I am grateful to all the poets that
contributed to this column. If you
missed the deadline, you can add poems in the comments section.
--Karen O’Leary, Whispers’
Editor
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The
Toast
Patiently awaiting warmth
Drinking in the sweet butter
While lying in the bright sun
By
Sara Kendrick—United States
The Spring Leaves
The Spring Leaves
Shuddering while being stroked
By the northwesterly winds
Dressed in spring's thin pale green
By
Sara Kendrick—United States
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Mt.
Fuji
Clouds
drift by
Fuji-san
peeks
through
her veil.
By
Thomas Canull—United States
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Sidewalk
Rails
Guardians of momentum
holding back those who
dare to rush
and
protecting them from wayward steps.
By
Langley Shazor—United States
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Portrait
Gallery 1
Yes,
admiration we do adore
silent
hedonism can be a bore.
By
Brian Strand—England
Portrait
Gallery 2
Up
close into my face they peer
often
my expression can bring a tear.
By
Brian Strand—England
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Katydids
Katydids
sing from their own hymnal
in
three part harmony.
By
Barbara Tate—United States
Tattle
Tale
Listening to what’s said,
Grandma’s
myna bird
tells family secrets.
By
Barbara Tate—United States
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When
Lovers Meet
Two
tiny birds flirt on the edge of a stone
bird-bath
- they dip and drink in unison
A
flower floats - his love offering.
By
Suzanne Delaney—United States
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Mother
Bird
Her
nest is traditional with modern twists,
Passion
fruit tendrils- fluff from our car covers.
With Saint-
like patience- her wings give shelter.
By
Suzanne Delaney—United States
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Wind
The
wind startled her
by
kissing a rosy cheek
with
the finesse of a lover.
By
Sunil Sharma--India
Roses
roses
dance softly,
faces flushed,
bent at waists
like
the tiny ballerinas during the break.
By
Sunil Sharma--India
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A
Story
Under
the old bridge
the
boulders narrate
the
abandoned journey.
By
Pravat Kumar Padhy--India
Talking
Time
Morning
breeze
all
the flowers start
talking to each
other.
By
Pravat Kumar Padhy--India
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Butterflies
two
butterflies are flying
dancing in a ballet
a
perfect duet
By
David Fox—United States
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On
A Breezy Day
Flirty washing lines sashay up and down
Flirty washing lines sashay up and down
and
freely give away their clean clothes.
By
Annie Jenkin--England
Noisy
Neighbours
The
gutters do nothing but mutter
with
the constant chatter by the French Windows
So
the walls interrupt the discussion
By
Annie Jenkin--England
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Deadline
Angry clock, busy red
second hand,
Don't
show your mocking face here!
Placid blank
walls -- gifts of infinite time.
By
David Leslie—United States
Long Check Out Line At Whole Foods
Organic
Potato chips
smirk with clerk
and pale kale chip patrons
but
they crack wise when safely home.
By
David Leslie—United States
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Love
Mountain
hearts beat
For
rising new lives.
By
Michele Leslie—United States
Meekness
Trees
peel off hats of leaves, toss
Them
to the sky’s feet. Under
Ground’s
leaves, tiny seeds cuddle, protected.
By
Michele Leslie—United States
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Fresco
Stained
glass window --
shadows
on the temple floor
paint a fresco
By
Raamesh Gowri Raghavan--India
Drops
As
little drops tame
the
blazing sun, the thirsting
earth
spins wild with joy.
By
Raamesh Gowri Raghavan--India
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Boiling
Your
teakettle taunts, whistling
“Pour
me out! Then you can relax.”
By
Kelley Jean White—United States
Temptress
Long
workday;
the
bed beckons invitingly.
By
Kelley Jean White—United States
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Maiden
Flight…
a
yellow rose opens
and launches a
butterfly
By
Karen O'Leary—United States
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Sunshine
As
I opened the blinds
I
sent a smile to the wind
then
I see the sun smiling back at me.
By
Maricris Cabrera—Philippines
Crabs
in the Basket
Crabs
racing up the basket
each
pulling down to the base
biting both hands and feet.
By
Maricris Cabrera—Philippines
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Snags
In
sheer meanness the bramble reached
Out snagging my soft
sheer silky shirt,
Precious
present my pretty one made.
By
David Palmer—United States
Comparison
Proud rhododendron stood
tall
Lording
it
over the rose
Pity
they both fade so soon.
By
David Palmer—United States
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Pretty
Cloud
She fluffs
out her dappled skirt.
The
crowd below admires her beauty,
snapping
scrolls of pictures on their cell phones.
Elizabeth
Howard—United States
Weathervane
The
cock is tired of turning with the wind.
He vows he'll
neither whirl nor saunter
until
the wind gives him a vacation.
Elizabeth
Howard—United States
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In
Fashion
Wearing
yellow sun hats
daffodils
ransack
the
back yard.
Mary
Jo Balestreri—United States
After
Hours Duet
A
lone sax plays
while
dust dances
on
the wooden floor.
Mary
Jo Balestreri—United States
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The Wood
Diminishing
sun.
The
dandelion heads,
Pointed our way home.
Ralph
Stott—England
Scarecrow
We
felt the
Eyeless scrutiny
Of
a pumpkin head.
Ralph
Stott—England
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First Light
Holding
the first light
a
monarch butterfly
smiles at me.
By
Archana Kapoor Nagpal—India
Tears
Next
to your grave
this
first snow
wipe off my
tears.
By
Archana Kapoor Nagpal—India
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Cactus
Flower
Rising
up out of the grave
of
dull colored rocks
comes
a smiling cactus flower.
By
Michael Escoubas
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Michael,
ReplyDeleteSome good entries here. Thanks for letting me participate in this activity.
Your friend,
David Fox
Dear David,
DeleteIt is good to have you a part of Michael's wonderful activity. Glad you enjoyed the final column. I did too!
Blessings,
Karen
Very creative!
ReplyDeleteDear Marianne,
DeleteI agree! Michael did a great job as activity editor for this column. Thank you sharing your comment.
Blessings,
Karen
Awesome collection
ReplyDeleteDear Archana,
DeleteI thought so, too. Michael came up with a wonderful activity. Thank you for being a part of it.
Blessings,
Karen
Where words sing!
ReplyDeleteDear Sunil,
DeleteWhat a wonderful thought! Thank you for contributing to this lovely collection. Kudos to Michael for putting this together for us to enjoy.
Blessings,
Karen
enjoyed these very much, especially the narrating boulders by Pravat. a great activity!
ReplyDeleteRalph
Dear Ralph,
DeleteThank you for being a part of this wonderful column. Michael did a great job as activity editor. I enjoyed reading all the creative poems.
Blessings,
Karen
Great collection! Enjoyed reading!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gert. Michael did a great job putting this together. Congratulations to all the contributors for sharing their creative poems.
DeleteBlessings,
Karen
This was fun--thank you for allowing me to be part of it. Enjoyed each and every one.
ReplyDeleteDear Barbara,
DeleteGlad to have you a part of this activity. Michael's idea was really a hit! Thank you to you and all the contributors who shared in this column.
Blessings,
Karen
Dear Karen and Michael,
ReplyDeleteThank you for bringing this expression of poetry to all of us. It was a fun exercise and I enjoyed being a part of it.
Dear Mary Jo,
DeleteMichael did a great job with this column! I knew his idea would be well received. Thank you so much for sharing in this activity. It means a lot to me, and I'm sure to Michael, too.
Blessings,
Karen
An excellent ensemble. My favourite was:
ReplyDeleteA lone sax plays
while dust dances
on the wooden floor.
Mary Jo Balestreri—United States
But loved the rest too!
Dear Raamesh,
DeleteI'm not surprised as Mary Jo is such a talented writer. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poetry for this activity. Many blessings in your journey.
Karen
What wonderful moments captured...enjoyed them all for their artistry and beauty! Thanks for the collection Karen.
ReplyDeleteDear Neena,
DeleteThank you so much for your kind words. Michael did a great job with this column. I hope you will consider sharing some words for these columns, too. Welcome to Whispers!!
Blessings,
Karen
Very nice work, poets. Congratulations to you all and thank you to Michael and Karen for this activity. Really loved the "Katydids" write by Barbara Tate. Continued blessings to you all!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Dear Maurice,
DeleteThe biggest kudos goes to Michael who put together this collection of artistic views. Thank you for your kind thoughts. I really appreciate all the people that shared their talent for this column.
Blessings,
Karen
Dear Poet Friends,
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone for participating in the "Art of Personification" exercise. I'm just now rechecking Karen's post of the project. Such fun reading the generous comments made. Karen and all the fine Whispers poets have blessed my life many times over as I've become part of Karen's family of poets. Now, I'm networking with poets writing from all parts of the globe.--I'm, thankful, honored, and humbled.
Dear Michael,
DeleteWhat a joy to have you a part of our Whispers' community. Thank you so much for being the activity editor this month. Your light is shining!
Blessings and best wishes,
Karen