The Family Fog
...I'm on the down side
of midnight
with a statute of limitations
looming,
too little, too late.
Living on the drama inside my
head
knowing stars still shine
at noon
and wondering why the breeze
loses its way,
the day needs a pause, a
break before
the curtains close.
Cuddling phantom pain
retreating to a fetal
position
remembering what I try to
forget,
a solitary vigil lives in the
vortex
sucking reality gone
till gone is all I have.
In the corner of yesterday's
memories
cherishing the quiet lonesome
with that statute of
limitations looming,
I lose myself in the family
fog
and ask "why"
before I forget to remember.
Barbara Tate is a member of
the Gulf Coast Writers Assoc., the Haiku Society of America and the United
Haiku & Tanka Society. She has been
published in Santa Fe Literary Review,
Storyteller Magazine, Frogpond, Modern Haiku, Contemporary Haibun Online, Bear
Creek Haiku, the Heron's Nest & Cattails, among others. She has
been included in several anthologies, most recently Robert Epstein's animal
rights anthology Every Chicken, Cow, Fish
and Frog. She currently resides in Winchester, TN.
Dear Barbara,
ReplyDeleteProfound truth conveyed thru a note a sadness.
Thank you for moving my heart.
Michael
Dear Michael--thank you for your kind words and thoughts.
DeleteBarbara,
ReplyDeleteSuch a touching poem. I enjoyed it a lot!
Your friend,
David Fox
Hi David. Hope everything's well with you and thanks for the comment. Will try to be more diligent in keeping in touch.
DeleteDear Barbara, Your touching poem made me get on my knees and pray for you. Such a picture of suffering. If rhis is happening to you, may God bless you.
ReplyDeleteLove, Charlene
Thank you for your kind words. This poem was inspired by a friend who entered a nursing home last year. Thank you again--your words gave me more inspiration than you will ever know!!
DeleteWell expressed Barbara. A lot of my life has been clouded over with
ReplyDeleteFamily fog. This is a very good writing.
Yancy
Thank you very much. I also want to thank you for taking your time to encourage each of us as you did for the March Activity "Alliteration and Assonance".
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