Undying
Love
It was just a homemade
valentine
with smudged fingerprints of
glue.
The heart had ragged edges
and the arrow wasn’t true.
But it brought a longed-for
message
to a lonely grandma’s room.
It brought a ray of sunshine
that chased away the gloom.
It was a caring child’s
creation;
thank God she didn’t know
the grimy hands that made it
died just two days ago,
beaten by a father
whose drunken eyes are dry.
Crooked letters say, “I love
you.”
Those words will never die.
Jean, at 82, has
been writing poems since she was 18. For 25 years she published a popular
poetry quarterly of up to 100 pages, with a subscribership of nearly 500.
Illness in 1986 ended the magazine. She published The Jokester, by email, a 2-page monthly of clean humor. Many of
our Whispers’ contributors were
published in various editions. October 2016 was her last issue.
Hello, Jean. Your poem of rhythm and rhyme shows a statement of love that lasts forever, in spite of cruelty and loneliness. Makes me sad and yet the poem shows hope. Good poem.
ReplyDeleteWhat a quietly powerful, heartbreaking poem. Well done, Jean.
ReplyDeleteMoving and touching. Very well-written, Jean. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing it with us.
ReplyDeleteDear Jean,
ReplyDeleteThis poem is powerful.
Thank you.
Michael
Jean,
ReplyDeleteA nice poem. Thank you for you dedication in publishing everything you did.
Your friend,
David
Great poem. Powerfully written, with edge too. Ralph
ReplyDeleteHeartfelt poem Jean! Thank you for sharing it! Good wishes, Chris~
ReplyDeleteTruley great poem Jean, good all the way through and a tear jerker end.
ReplyDeleteas a silhouette around the title. I loved this poem.
Yancy