Why?
(a villanelle)
I saw my lover’s face within
the sky
Last night when evening swept
the sun away.
I asked her silently one
question: Why?
For was not youth so luminous
and spry
Upon her countenance just
yesterday?
I saw my lover’s face within
the sky,
Through tears reflecting
clouds that drifted by;
And while I gazed up toward
the Milky Way,
I asked her silently once
question: Why?
Yes, why did death’s dark
doorway multiply
The grief the sad earth daily
does display?
I saw my lover’s face within
the sky,
And prior to my bidding her
goodbye—
Her comeliness commencing its
decay,
I asked her silently one
question: Why?
But never was I granted a
reply:
I only watched her fade with
coming day.
I saw my lover’s face within
the sky
I asked her silently one
question: Why?
John Polselli’s poetry has
been published in many literary journals and is the recipient of several
Editor’s Choice Awards. As a poet, John enjoys composing in all traditional
forms including free verse as well as inventing his own.
Dear John,
ReplyDeleteThank you for this excellent example of the Villanelle form. Like especially your alliterative sequence in line 1 of stanza 4.
Blessings,
Michael
John
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. I loved it!Your friend,
David Fox
Very well said John, Many things in life lead to the question why?
ReplyDeleteYancy
Hi Poetry Friends,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind thoughts on John's poem. I will send them to him. John, it's a joy to be able to share a variety of poetry, and your villanelle is a creative example on how suspense can be achieved through repetition. Nice use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts.
Blessings and best wishes,
Karen