The
Shadows of the Night
By Gert
Knop--Germany & Jack Horne--England
The shadows of the night,
fall on me like autumnal leaves,
forgotten in the wind,
lost like
snow breeze in the evening
Memories of the day,
captured
in the network of thoughts,
lost in the invisible,
blur with the shadows of the night
into nowhere
Between the days
lies hope
as dew on the meadows.
Future times,
uncertain
like the memory,
lose themselves
between wind and clouds
This sleepless night,
the clock ticks
like your heartbeat
on nights long gone
when I lay in your arms.
You chased the nightmares
into shadows;
and turned the shadows
into beautiful moonlit dreams.
I walk the room,
wipe the windowpane,
and wonder if you too
watch the moon and stars -
and if you think of me tonight...
...just for a heartbeat.
Dear Jack and Gert,
ReplyDeleteThank you for this poem full of gentle images that, to quote Rilke, "blossom like the night filled with stars."
With high regard,
Michael
Dear Michael,
DeleteThank you so much for your comment to our cowrite, my friend!
Appreciated it that you quoted Rilke!
Kind regards,
Gert
Ok I'll try again! Beautiful poem of lost love, Gentlemen! your lines petfectly capture space & time! james goff
ReplyDeleteHi, James,
DeleteAppreciated your comment and your friendly words!
All the best,
Gert
Dear Gert & Jack just for a heartbeat, I read love
ReplyDeletehope and despair and wonderful scenery all wrapped
up in the wonders of life. Very good writing in
Collaboration of two great talents. I loved it.
Yancy
Dear Yancy,
DeleteGreat that you loved our cowrite, my friend!
And your kind words!
All the best,
Gert
You too are leaders on how to get it done.
DeleteThanks again for sharing this.
Yancy
A great poem laced with commingled emotion pouring from the two poets.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gopal for your friendly comment to our cowrite!
DeleteAll the best,
Gert
Gert ad Jack,
ReplyDeleteA wonderful collaboration in one poem! Congratulations!
ours truly,
David Fox
Well done to each of you, it is an inspired write, tugs strings and paints images. Thank you for sharing this creation. Best wishes
ReplyDeleteThank you, Annie for your comment! All the best, Gert
DeleteEnjoyed your piece, thanks for sharing it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting our cowrite Peggy! Great that you enjoyed it!
DeleteLovely poem, lyrical way to approach night.
ReplyDeleteAppreciated your comment, Peggy! Thanks for posting it.
Deletethanks to everyone for the lovely comments
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed our cowrite, Jack and we'll carry on in the future! I'm overwhelmed of so many kind comments.
DeleteLove,
Gert
I walk the room,
ReplyDeletewipe the windowpane,
and wonder if you too
watch the moon and stars -
and if you think of me tonight...
Wistful longing and unanswered questions make for beautiful poetry.
Great Danny, appreciated your thoughts and well written lines!
DeleteThank you for posting your comment! Take care. kind regards, Gert
Excellent...it is a pleasure to find two minds communicating with ease on the same wavelength, as Gert and Jack. A memory in a heartbeat...Regards // paul
ReplyDeleteThank you Paul for your friendly comment on our cowrite!
DeleteAll the best and kind regards, Gert
Very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Raamesh Gowri for your appreciated comment! Kind regards, Gert
DeleteDear Gert and Jack,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful response to your heartfelt poem. The two of you write so well together. I hope to read more of you collaborative poems in the future.
Blessings,
Karen
Dear Karen, I enjoyed reading your comment on our collabrorative poem. Yes,we both have a pleasure to write together and for sure we'll post more in future.
DeleteLove,
Gert
Thank you, Isha, for the following--
ReplyDeleteThe title of this poem tells it all. We all know the Shadows of the Night and would probably be surprised if we could read into others' minds and find extraordinary similarity. And yet we are all individuals and these two poets have collaborated and put together beautifully constructed lines that make one cry or smile. Well done.
Yours sincerely
Isha Wagner