Under This Weeping Tree
Standing under this weeping tree
Hearing raindrops fall on golden leaves
Whispers from your heart to mine
Trickles of love upon my face
Hearing raindrops fall on golden leaves
Whispers from your heart to mine
Trickles of love upon my face
A smile grows with drizzling drops
Looking up into the storm
Seeing your face within the tree
Joy cleansed tears falling on me
Looking up into the storm
Seeing your face within the tree
Joy cleansed tears falling on me
Golden and green swaying breeze
Waving, beckoning, mesmerizing colors
Touching, tapping, reaching down
Pulling me up into your arms
Waving, beckoning, mesmerizing colors
Touching, tapping, reaching down
Pulling me up into your arms
Your glow, your smile, your gentle sound
Embracing quietly, attentive, true
Eyes closing gently
Feeling you
Embracing quietly, attentive, true
Eyes closing gently
Feeling you
Julie Petersen is a poet and amateur photographer. Her
work has been published in Tuck Magazine, Indiana Voice
Journal, the Moonlight Dreamers of Yellow Haze anthology,
which can be purchased on Amazon, and will soon be published in the Dandelion
in a Vase of Roses anthology. Julie is planning to release her first chap
book of poetry in the near future. Her writer page can be found on Facebook.
Dear Julie
ReplyDeleteVery impressive witting as under the weeping tree feeling loves
glow, smile, genteel sound of embracing quietly, attentive,
true eyes closing gently, feeling you. I enjoyed it.
Yancy
Dear Julie,
ReplyDeleteIt's good to see you already have one wonderful comment from Yancy. Congratulations! Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us.
Blessings,
Karen
Dear Julie,
ReplyDeleteAllow me to add words of welcome to Whispers and so appreciate you well-crafted debut poem.
Do send us more!
Michael
Julie,
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem. A warm welcome to Whispers and please do keep submitting!
Your new friend,
David Fox
Welcome to Wispers! And thanks for the lovely poem!
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