Dear Whispers’ Family,
The March writing activity has been, Working Alliteration and Assonance into Our Poetry. Thank you to
all who sent in submissions. What a delight it is to read all of your
skillfully crafted creations. Let poetry be fun!
Michael Escoubas, Whispers’
Features Editor
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Dublin on the Liffey
The Liffey
– no longer sniffy,
ambles
through our capital city.
It once
inspired Jack B. Yeats
to paint The
Liffey Swim*.
Nowadays,
it’s a genial host
to cruise
liners and tall ships.
*1923, Nat.
Gallery of Ireland.
Mary Gunn, Ireland.
_________
Memory lane
As I walk down the memory lane
plateaus of emotions whine and wane,
Grace on face stays
while smile deepens,
and wrinkles sprinkle
the essence of pretence in time.
Dr. Upma Sharma, India.
_________
The Treasure
Furry feet in hasty haste
Eating eggs tasty taste.
Diana Dalton, United States
_________
"Haiku" (Double Triodyne)
Good writers writing in haiku
Strange title to set subject to
All subjects one title, "Haiku"
Time after time, line on line
Reason for a title in a Triodyne
Line on line, time after time
Good writers writing in haiku
Strange title to set subject to
All subjects one title, "Haiku"
Time after time, line on line
Reason for a title in a Triodyne
Line on line, time after time
Yancy Lee Dalton, United States
________
Pregnancy Cravings
I buy myself, red roses wrapped in ribbons
As I feel so depressed and restless
I walk here and there and everywhere
To curb my pregnancy cravings
I can only think of turkey tacos
Or the delicious donut dipped in dairy
creamer.
Archana Kapoor, India
_________
Two, to go
A simple chicken biscuit
A simple chicken biscuit
in Chapel Hill
conjures college-day memories
of road trips and restlessness,
flaky and buttery.
Douglas S. Malan, United States
_________
Golden Persimmons
coffee cake and persimmon wine
let us dine
too late
raccoons rampaged through the gate
and ate and ate and ate
Elizabeth Howard, United States
________
She Winks
astutter aflutter
my blinks
subtle and supple...
i turn nary a spurn
her kiss feels like bliss
Pat Geyer, United States
astutter aflutter
my blinks
subtle and supple...
i turn nary a spurn
her kiss feels like bliss
Pat Geyer, United States
_________
Smiling in My Sleep
Milky Way moonlight
spills pools upon my pillow,
protection and peace.
Candace Armstrong, United States
_________
The tap
Transparent I transcend
A spit, splatter or splash
All rains down to ripple and rise
Confined and contained
Constantly until I reach the rim
Where I run, rushing over freely
Anna-Marie Docherty, Wales
_________
Precious Peace
In times of stress, sweets bring momentary solace.
Aspiring higher actuates a heavenly alliance
bringing a blessed and more enduring substance.
With His help I give heed to "Let go and let God"
In times of stress, sweets bring momentary solace.
Aspiring higher actuates a heavenly alliance
bringing a blessed and more enduring substance.
With His help I give heed to "Let go and let God"
Charlene McCutcheon, United States
_________
Beneath the Coyote Moon
Twirling, twisting, whirling,
the west wind wanders and winds down
lonely canyons kicking up sand
and dancing with tumbleweeds
to escape its earthly heaven.
Barbara Tate, United States
_________
Confusion
Restless roaming through my raging thoughts
An unceasing search for truth is scourging
my weary, dreary molested mind
The pleasant purring of my content cat
wakes me out of my dubious dazed state
Inge Wesdijk (Daginne Aignend) the Netherlands
_________
Money Makers
Making money may make me rich
Saving some with little spent
I’ll be wealthy when I die
Prosperous people live longer lives
If you save a lot like me
Someday you can be debt free
Glenda B. Frazier, United States
_________
honeybee
a honeybee and her happy life
swing and swirl in nature’s ride
lick and lift the nectar of flowers
feel and fight with toxic powers
drain and drop a sweet viscous
present a precious heaven liquor.
Hifsa Ashraf,
Pakistan
_________
The Theater Calendar
Fitful flurries sift onto the orange primrose.
Morning warms and we two gardeners
wait for a daytime high that will keep
pea seeds from freezing. We want
to remember to watch for the stage
of this night’s moon, sliver seekers.
Tricia Knoll, United States
_________
"Unkind, Undaunted ... and Unpublished"
There once was a pompous poet
Her poetry did definitely show it
"If you don't absolutely love it
You can take it and shove it"
With every poem she'd send, she'd blow it
David Fox, United States
_________
Great Grades
when our college students
study seriously and systemically
exam fear fades away fast for some
every paying guardian or parent expects
cool scores, not crappy, creepy grades
or curt remarks from careless educators
Ndaba Sibanda, Kuwait
_________
Misty Dreams
In stealthful shadows,
the pensive pilgrim
pauses for a moment…
nature whispers
to his searching soul…
a twilight adieu
Karen O’Leary, United States
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Dream
This enchanted evening seems
full of grace and goodness.
Your gown of silk and lace
draped in velvet folds cascades
down and around your silver slippers.
We dance in this my dream romance.
Michael Escoubas, United States
_________
Beautiful collection Michael. I loved all of them.
ReplyDeleteDear Archana,
DeleteThank you for taking time to read these creative poems. Your comment is appreciated.
Michael
I enjoyed your comment Archane
DeleteYancy
Thank you, Archana, Michael, and Yancy. Your words graces Whispers pages. I appreciate your ongoing support.
DeleteBlessings,
Karen
All I can say Karen is, participation brings
Deleteme Joy. Thanks for Whispers!
Yancy
Michael Escoubas from USA inside self did "Dream" of romance. Karen
ReplyDeleteKaren O’Leary also of USA also had "Misty Dreams" Both were good
but they were not in competition While Ndaba Sibanda, from Kuwait was
teaching some how to get "Great Grades" dispute careless educators.
David Fox from USA scribed a pompous poet who every poem she'd send,
she'd blow it in work titled "Unkind, Undaunted ... and Unpublished" Some
where between sadness and humor. Next Tricia Knoll, of USA Looks at "The
Theater Calendar" to set stage of this night’s moon, sliver seekers. Followed
by Hifsa Ashraf, from Pakistan writing "honeybee" with toxic powers. Glenda
B. Frazier, of USA, discuses how to be one of those "Money Makers" to
become debt free. Giving Inge Wesdijk (Daginne Aignend) the Netherlands,
"confusion". emerging out of his dubious dazed state. Barbara Tate, From
USA gives us Twirling, twisting, whirling, "Beneath the Coyote Moon"
Amazingly Charlene McCutcheon, USA sneaks Precious Peace, finds
"Precious Peace" learning one must "Let go and let God" As Anna-Marie
Docherty of Wales taps into "The tap" so she can run freely. As Candace
Armstrong, of USA finds herself "Smiling in My Sleep" as Milky Way moon
light flows to her pillows protection. Then Pat Geyer, of USA says she "She
Winks" at her blinks when her kiss feels like bliss. Next Elizabeth Howard of
the good old USA wrote "Golden Persimmons" to eat to late as raccoons
rampaged through the gate. Douglas S. Malan, of the USA, conjures college
day memories of A simple chicken biscuit in Chapel Hill flaky and buttery.
Yummy!" Two to go" Archana Kapoor, India, said I walk here and there and
everywhere to curb my "pregnancy cravings" in good food imagining While
Yancy Lee Dalton of USA try's to sell his triodyne over Haiku.Diana Dalton Of
USA finds "The Treasure" in Furry feet in hasty haste eating eggs tasty taste.
Then Dr. Upma Sharma of India. Took a trip down "Memory lane" while smile
deepens, and wrinkles sprinkle the essence of pretence in time. Last but not
least Mary Gunn, of Ireland, gave us "Dublin on the Liffey" It once inspired Jack
B. Yeats to paint The Liffey Swim*. Nowadays, it’s a genial host to cruise liners
and tall ships. Very great writing each and all. Yancy's Knight Writer notes as
viewed from his horseless mount writing through a forest of fabulous writers.
Yancy
Wow Yancy!!
DeleteYour creative energy blesses our writing community.
Thank you,
Michael
Yancy now I would have to say you are one who is definitely talented to come up with such a creative piece that blessed every one of us. Thank you.Charlene
DeleteThanks very much Charlene and Michael
DeleteYancy
Wow Yancy!
DeleteThank you for taking time to encourage and support others. We are a community of many which you acknowledge. It is so good to have you a part of Whispers!
Blessings,
Karen
What a delight to be able to just sit for a while this morning to enjoy this wealth of talent in the poetry and techniques used above. Such a treat, thank you all for sharing your abilities...
ReplyDeleteDear Anaisnais,
DeleteI agree, nothing better than a respite with poetry and maybe coffee or tea in a sunny chair??
Blessings,
Michael
Amen to your thoughts Anaisnais,
DeleteYancy
Dear Anna-Marie,
DeleteThank you for sharing your poem for this well-crafted and artistic view. Michael is doing a great job as Features Editor. I look forward to more of your poetry in the months ahead.
Blessings,
Karen
Quite a collection in this March Activity. Always a joy to read and write
ReplyDeleteGood Morning, Inge,
DeleteSo pleased you enjoyed the collection and took the time to make a comment.
Blessings,
Michael
I agree Inge! Thank you for sharing your poem and comments. It's encouraging voices like you that make Whispers possible.
DeleteBlessings,
Karen
Yancy,
ReplyDeleteThanks for mentioning my poem and so many others.
Yours truly,
David Fox
You are quite welcome, David!
DeleteKeep shining your bright creative light.
Michael
You are very welcome David. I believe every writer in
Deletethis activity deserves more credit for their poetry,
than I could give them. good writing all.
Yancy
Hi David,
DeleteThank you for being such an uplifting voice at Whispers. Thank you for all you do to support others. Wishing you the best always.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you Michel for the selection of poems my friend,I enjoyed reading them even if I missed mine.
ReplyDeleteLove,
Gert
So pleased to know you enjoyed them, Gert!
DeleteBlessings,
Michael
Dear Gert,
DeleteAs always, it is a pleasure to publish your poetry. Thank you for all you do for our poetry community.
Blessings always,
Karen
I enjoyed reading all of them so much! Congrats on such a great collection Michael!
ReplyDeleteWarmest, Claudia
Dear Claudia,
DeleteThis activity was no end of fun for the Features Editor!
Great hearing from you,
Michael
Dear Claudia,
DeleteThank your for your kind words. Hopefully, you will be a part of the next activity Michael will present for us to try.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you so much for this wonderful infusion of poems into my day!
ReplyDeleteGreetings Joan,
DeleteI'm gratified with your enthusiasm that mirrors many in the Whispers' family of fine poets.
Blessings and so glad you enjoyed the activity.
Michael
Dear Joan,
DeleteMichael does such a fantastic job finding creative opportunities for our Whispers' family to enjoy. I hope you consider sharing in next month's challenge.
Blessings,
Karen
It was a delight to read them all, memorable lines, catchy tales and stories all beautifully wrapped in this wonderous package. Thank you everyone - it is a joy to read them all.
ReplyDeleteDear Annie,
DeleteI, too, was arrested by both the range and quality of submissions to this activity.
I agree with what you both say
DeleteAnnie and Michael.
Yancy
Dear Annie,
DeleteLike Yancy, you and Michael have enjoyed this wonderful column with its variety of verse. What a blessing to share the gift of words.
Best wishes,
Karen
Thank you so much for getting these poems together. It is indeed a pleasure to be included with this talented group of writers.
ReplyDeleteDear Barbara,
DeleteThank you for taking part in what has come to be one of our more popular and productive activities.
Blessings,
Michael
Dear Barbara,
DeleteThank you for taking part in this month's challenge. Michael has done a great job putting this column together. Thank you for sharing your creative verse.
Blessings,
Karen
Michael, indeed it is a pleasure to be included among the array of such well written poetry. I surely did enjoy all of the poems. Thank you for providing the opportunities you have afforded us in honing up on our skills and also learning some new ones. You are a blessing to all of us. Karen chose just the right person for the Activity Leader.
ReplyDeleteSincerely, Charlene
Dear Charlene,
DeleteComment such as yours make this journey most enjoyable.
Blessings,
Michael
Dear Charlene,
DeleteThank you for sharing your inspirational poem for this wonderful column that Michael has put together for us to enjoy. I did choose the right Features Editor! Michael is doing a wonderful job in his new position.
Blessings,
Karen
Great Comment Charlene. I enjoyed every thing
ReplyDeleteYou said here.
Yancy
Thank you, Isha, for the following--
ReplyDeleteI find this collection extraordinarily rich : these poems seem as an
adventure into a place with thousands of brilliantly lit caves. .
Yours sincerely,
Isha Wagner
Dear Isha,
ReplyDeleteMichael did a wonderful job collecting a variety of poems for this beautiful collection. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind thoughts.
Blessings,
Karen