Thursday, March 16, 2017

Partners in Poetry—By Diana Marie and Yancy Lee Dalton--United States

March Madness?
By Diana Marie and Yancy Lee Dalton

February blew march winds away
Stole Marches thunder in a windy play
March Plots eastern Stella storm
Yet leaves Arizona toasty warm

American citizens in hot debate
Whether Trump is horrid or great
To New York's snowy blizzard scene
St. Patrick adds a pinch of Green

 On earth march madness reigns
 Unless we break worldly chains
 Love from spirit to each impart
 Tuning in with God’s Loving heart
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28 comments:

  1. Marianne SzlykMarch 17, 2017 at 5:35 AM

    A true collaboration!

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    1. UnknownMarch 17, 2017 at 8:39 AM

      .Thank you very much knowledgeable Whispers friend.
      Yancy

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    2. Light XpressionsMarch 17, 2017 at 10:53 AM

      .Thank you very much Marianne

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  2. Gert W. KnopMarch 17, 2017 at 6:00 AM

    Well written, Diana Marie and Yancy Lee! We here in Germany saw
    the blizzard chaos on tv. At least St. Patrick added a 'pinch of Green'! Our Chancellor Merkel meets Trump today and I'm wondering what they will discuss. I still believe that Trump is too chaotic to be a good president for the US. Thanks for posting your collaborative poem.

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    1. UnknownMarch 17, 2017 at 8:52 AM

      Thanks Gert, I love your comentary about this. I didn't
      know about that meeting but hope it goes well. I believe
      Trump is a very good president and if these globelist do
      not assignate him first, he will bring back our true
      constitution. Thanks for your loving responce.
      Yancy

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    2. Light XpressionsMarch 17, 2017 at 8:53 AM

      Danke! for your response Gert. I guess each see what they see. that includes our views and projection on trump. I am not sure of what I see now days so I will wait and see. How was march in Germany for you?

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  3. UnknownMarch 17, 2017 at 7:47 AM

    Dear Diana and Yancy,
    Very nice as your winsome commentary encourages us to think about life, about nature, about people. Surely, this is one of poetry's functions. So glad for this fresh Partners in Poetry submission.
    Blessings,
    Michael

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    1. Light XpressionsMarch 17, 2017 at 9:00 AM

      Thank you Michael. Yes writing poetry does cause us to think about our thoughts and viewing things from different views can free our minds of their chains

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    2. UnknownMarch 17, 2017 at 9:25 AM

      Thanks Michael, your awesome thoughts encourage growth.
      You said to me in another comment "we need each other"
      I totally agree with that. Whispers helps us share our
      love to the point, all members grow.
      Yancy

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  4. paul callusMarch 17, 2017 at 8:21 AM

    Congrats on this seamless collaboration, Diana and Yancy. It's good to have you working in tandem. I support both February and March since in these months my wife and I celebrate our birthdays. Regards // paul

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    1. Light XpressionsMarch 17, 2017 at 8:46 AM

      Happy Birthdays to you both and thank you for your respone

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    2. UnknownMarch 17, 2017 at 9:04 AM

      I join with my wife in whishing you and yours a happy
      birthday Paul. I really loved your loving response. I
      am also happy that February was also mentond for your
      birthdays sake.
      Yancy

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  5. UnknownMarch 17, 2017 at 8:44 AM

    Hi Diana and Yancy,
    A wonderful, thoughtful poem bringing up topical issues.
    I loved your ending and totally agree.
    Well done on a beautuful collaboration.
    Love,
    Yvonne

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    1. Light XpressionsMarch 17, 2017 at 8:47 AM

      Thank you so much Yvonne

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    2. UnknownMarch 17, 2017 at 9:12 AM

      Thanks Yvonne, your muse has just the right things
      to say, what understanding you have. Thanks for your
      sisterly thoughts in the Whispers family.
      Yancy

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  6. UnknownMarch 17, 2017 at 10:57 AM

    Aloha Diana Marie and Yancy Lee,
    Love your clever use of the metaphor of March madness to describe various elements of our life. Thank you for sharing your talent.
    Molly

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    1. UnknownMarch 17, 2017 at 11:38 AM

      Thanks Molly, I love your precious well designed
      comment. Many blessings to you.
      Yancy

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  7. Light XpressionsMarch 17, 2017 at 12:44 PM

    Thank you so much Molly

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  8. OzymandiasMarch 17, 2017 at 11:44 PM

    I like this gentle mixture of humour and playfulness, of hope and love... made my day. Thank you so much.

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    1. Light XpressionsMarch 18, 2017 at 10:35 AM

      Love what you are seeing it tells me you are this way too. Thank you for your response

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    2. UnknownMarch 18, 2017 at 10:44 AM

      Dear Raamesh, your nice well covered comment
      made my day. Thank you.
      Yancy

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  9. CharleneMarch 18, 2017 at 10:03 AM

    Thank you for a well written collaborative effort. Indeed Arizona where I grew up is all too well remembered as toasty warm in the Valley of the Sun. Loved the spiritual ending.
    Charlene

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    1. Light XpressionsMarch 18, 2017 at 10:37 AM

      Thank you Charlene. I love Spiritual ending too. That is where the truth lies in the love within us.

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    2. UnknownMarch 18, 2017 at 10:56 AM

      Dear Whispers sister Charlene, I grew up in Utah,
      moved to Colorado, and now live in Arizona.
      I love it here when its toasty warm.
      Thanks for your nice day making
      comments
      Yancy

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  10. Karen O'LearyMarch 18, 2017 at 9:15 PM

    Dear Diana and Yancy,

    What a wonderful response to your timely poem! Thank so so much for sharing it for our readers to enjoy.

    I hope you will be writing others for our journal community to enjoy. Happy Writing!

    Blessings,
    Karen

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    1. UnknownMarch 19, 2017 at 7:29 PM

      Thanks Karen, I am having fun doing this. I already
      found out from Micheal that we can do one a month;
      I like that Diana with her own mind can speak for
      herself when it comes to member comments.
      Thanks for this great on line journal.
      Yancy

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    2. Karen O'LearyMarch 19, 2017 at 8:27 PM

      Dear Yancy,

      Each writer does what he or she can for Whispers. I'm grateful for anyone that has contributed to our writing family in any way. Thank you so much for all you are doing to encourage other poets.

      Many Blessings,
      Karen

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    3. UnknownMarch 19, 2017 at 9:50 PM

      I agree Karen. It is a magical
      wonderful thing.
      Yancy

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