a water paradox
Time and again I like to sip
a little of you, feel you drip down
my throat, leaving a stain on my lip,
that way my life you humbly sustain.
You are seen by many as simple
and in sync with life when fairly ample,
but the blight you possess when in excess,
or when you are scarce scant and erratic,
has unveiled the animosity in you.
You have hailed down untold grief
on my kids, my wife and my life;
my garden wilting at your absence,
or being swept away at your abundance,
sparing no elite, no destitute,
yet time and again I still need you closer.
Frances Simwinga is a budding poet. He has discovered healing in poetry. He happens to be biased towards slam poetry but greatly enjoys the written word too. This poem was inspired by the floods that have caused havoc to human life recently in the southern parts of the Malawi.
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ReplyDeleteHi Frances, "a water paradox" is fascinatingly enjoyable. What a beautiful story about he power of water, which happens to be my favorite drink. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Dear Maurise.
DeleteThank very much. Much more blessings too.
Frances
Wow, Frances, I love your sensuous and embracing poem defined around "water"! Very clever and creative making your words irresistible and picturesque! Hope to read many poems of yours! Sheri ** I corrected my previous posting
ReplyDeleteDear She Sta,
DeleteMuch more thanks for the sweet words.
Frances
Frances this is a powerful poem with such imagery that I feel as if the river is also affecting my life.
ReplyDeletePam
Dear Pam,
DeleteAm humbled.
Frances
I see the juxtaposition of dry blue sky and moonsoon clouds. This is a captivating study of the fickleness of water.
ReplyDeleteDear Elizabeth,
DeleteMama thank you much you enjoyed the poem.
Frances.
WOW! Nice poem there my friend Simwinga. I love it.
ReplyDeleteDear Ntchindi,
Deleteits nice to have you here. Thank you
Frances
Frances, what a creative piece of work, personification of water. It is an amazing poem that tells it all. thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.
ReplyDeleteCharlene
Thank you, Suzanne Clement, for the following--
ReplyDeleteAn interesting way of describing on of life's basic needs, Frances!
Suzanne