Painting pictures with words.
Opening a part of the soul.
Emotion flowing with the lines.
Tapestry skillfully woven.
Reflecting thoughts artfully.
Yearning to make a difference.
--Karen O'Leary--Whispers' Editor
Monday, February 9, 2015
Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By Miriam Sagan and Michael G. Smith--United States
Haiku From the Realm of Disability
By Miriam Sagan and Michael G. Smith
Manhattan canyons – mini dress and sneakers I can run in
Welcome to Whispers Miriam! Thank you both for sharing this wonderful haiku series for our online journal. It's good to see you already have two comments. I know you will be getting a lot more. Best wishes Michael and Miriam with all your writing endeavors.
Very nicely done, Miriam and Michael. A pleasant delight that brings back fond childhood summer memories for me. Welcome to Whispers, Miriam. Thank you both for sharing. Continued blessings!
I really enjoyed the Haiku. Quite an interesting and well written collaboration Michael and Miriam. Welcome to Whispers Miriam and thank you both for sharing your talents with us here. Charlene
I can just see Spring in Manhattan in this piece; people out and about in light clothing, happy that winter's finally been put to rest. Excellent read!
That's what my hubby called Manhattan ... the canyon ... but how he loved Brooklyn. This poem brings me back to when.
ReplyDeleteMiriam and Michael,
ReplyDeleteA splendid collaboration! Welcome to whispers, Miriam! I hope you post more poems.
Yours truly,
David Fox
Welcome to Whispers Miriam! Thank you both for sharing this wonderful haiku series for our online journal. It's good to see you already have two comments. I know you will be getting a lot more. Best wishes Michael and Miriam with all your writing endeavors.
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Very nicely done, Miriam and Michael. A pleasant delight that brings back fond childhood summer memories for me. Welcome to Whispers, Miriam. Thank you both for sharing. Continued blessings!
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I really enjoyed the Haiku. Quite an interesting and well written collaboration Michael and Miriam. Welcome to Whispers Miriam and thank you both for sharing your talents with us here.
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Wonderful! Thank you both for this!
ReplyDeleteA love interlude... give and take... back and forth... Joy emanates.
ReplyDeleteNot sure who wrote what, but it sure fits together well. Enjoyed the collaboration very much. Robert
ReplyDeleteThank-you all for reading and for your wonderful and insightful comments!
ReplyDeleteBe well, Michael
Delightful, you two! Now I'm wondering where the other flip-flop went. There's a story! :)
ReplyDeleteKarla
Hi Karla, Well, that is based on a tale about the Buddhist monk Bodhidharma and my given Zen name, One Sandal....
DeleteEnjoyed the collaborative effect this write,,'
ReplyDeleteI can just see Spring in Manhattan in this piece; people out and about in light clothing, happy that winter's finally been put to rest. Excellent read!
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