Friday, February 6, 2015

Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By Peggy Dugan French and ayaz daryl nielsen--United States

afternoon enchantment

By Peggy Dugan French and ayaz daryl nielsen

the blue sailed on forever
honeysuckle zephyr
whispered through the pines
and the cherry blossoms
elegantly graced the fading afternoon
whippoorwills called to their mates
their song drifting through the forest
after all, a grateful sense of the genuine
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26 comments:

  1. angeleeFebruary 6, 2015 at 10:33 AM

    Peggy ayaz what a lovely poem ...very beautifully blended love angelee

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  2. pdfrenchFebruary 6, 2015 at 10:41 AM

    Thank you for your kind words angelee!!

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2015 at 11:17 AM

    thank you, Angelee, and for your lovely display of the poem - will use it in an upcoming bear creek post, if ok - best to you far-away day (night)? lovely, indeed -

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  4. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 11:49 AM

    Love it!! That last line says it all "a grateful sense of the genuine" --sums up everything. Thank you for sharing this creation.

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    1. pdfrenchFebruary 6, 2015 at 2:26 PM

      So glad you enjoyed it Barbara!

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    2. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2015 at 11:13 AM

      thank you for sharing your lovely words

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  5. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 1:40 PM

    Ayaz and Peggy,
    This is a great poem -- rich with imagery.
    ~Davidf

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    1. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2015 at 11:14 AM

      than k you, David - best to your weekend (and beyond)!

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  6. pdfrenchFebruary 6, 2015 at 2:27 PM

    Thanks David, glad you liked it!

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  7. Joan MackFebruary 6, 2015 at 3:21 PM

    One long and beautiful thought. You carry it and sustain it so very well.

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  8. AnielicaFebruary 6, 2015 at 5:11 PM

    You have both created a lovely scenic view for the reader to enjoy, thank you Peggy and Ayaz for sharing your wonderful poem. ... Leokadia

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    1. pdfrenchFebruary 7, 2015 at 7:34 AM

      Thanks for your kind words Anielica!

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    2. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2015 at 11:06 AM

      thank you for sharing your lovely words -

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  9. CharleneFebruary 6, 2015 at 8:25 PM

    This is a really beautiful well written piece, Peggy and Ayaz so full of imagery. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talents.
    Charlene

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    1. pdfrenchFebruary 7, 2015 at 7:34 AM

      Thank you Charlene! So glad you enjoyed what we created together.

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    2. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2015 at 11:05 AM

      thank you, Charlene, your words are much appreciated -

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2015 at 2:15 PM

    Nice collaboration Peggy and ayaz. Shorter than the other collaborations, but just as impactful, nonetheless. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2015 at 10:45 PM

      thank you, Maurice - appreciated -

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  11. pdfrenchFebruary 11, 2015 at 7:30 AM

    Thank you Maurice, really appreciate your kind words!

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  12. paul callusFebruary 13, 2015 at 5:18 AM

    A short but very delightful poem that enchants the soul. Genuine imagery! Highly rated. Well done to both of you! // paul

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  13. RhymetimebluezBlogFebruary 21, 2015 at 8:18 PM

    I love the imagery you have created. As stated above, this is truly delightful!

    Pam

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