Friday, February 6, 2015

Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By Peggy Dugan French and ayaz daryl nielsen--United States

afternoon enchantment

By Peggy Dugan French and ayaz daryl nielsen

the blue sailed on forever
honeysuckle zephyr
whispered through the pines
and the cherry blossoms
elegantly graced the fading afternoon
whippoorwills called to their mates
their song drifting through the forest
after all, a grateful sense of the genuine

26 comments:

  1. Peggy ayaz what a lovely poem ...very beautifully blended love angelee

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  2. Thank you for your kind words angelee!!

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  3. thank you, Angelee, and for your lovely display of the poem - will use it in an upcoming bear creek post, if ok - best to you far-away day (night)? lovely, indeed -

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  4. Love it!! That last line says it all "a grateful sense of the genuine" --sums up everything. Thank you for sharing this creation.

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  5. Ayaz and Peggy,
    This is a great poem -- rich with imagery.
    ~Davidf

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    1. than k you, David - best to your weekend (and beyond)!

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  6. One long and beautiful thought. You carry it and sustain it so very well.

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  7. You have both created a lovely scenic view for the reader to enjoy, thank you Peggy and Ayaz for sharing your wonderful poem. ... Leokadia

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    1. Thanks for your kind words Anielica!

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    2. thank you for sharing your lovely words -

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  8. This is a really beautiful well written piece, Peggy and Ayaz so full of imagery. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talents.
    Charlene

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    1. Thank you Charlene! So glad you enjoyed what we created together.

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    2. thank you, Charlene, your words are much appreciated -

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  9. Nice collaboration Peggy and ayaz. Shorter than the other collaborations, but just as impactful, nonetheless. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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  10. Thank you Maurice, really appreciate your kind words!

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  11. A short but very delightful poem that enchants the soul. Genuine imagery! Highly rated. Well done to both of you! // paul

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  12. I love the imagery you have created. As stated above, this is truly delightful!

    Pam

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