Another birthday drawing near
-
although, of course, you are
not here;
I'm not to send a gift or
card,
no text or email - very hard.
I struggle still to understand
how it went wrong, and not as
planned.
I fell in love, believed you
cared;
and now recall the times we
shared:
it seemed so good, so why
goodbye,
that sudden end, no reasons
why?
I must move on, my friends
all say,
(they didn't like you
anyway...)
I hope your birthday's full
of fun,
but if it's dull, then think
of one,
who wishes he were by your
side...
I know if you saw this, you
sighed
Jack Horne enjoys reading and
writing poetry. He is Whispers' Activity
Features Editor.
Love it, Jack. A sentimental and descriptive write. Very well-written. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ
(www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com)
Nice piece Jack!
ReplyDeleteDear Jack,
ReplyDeleteA heartfelt write, thank you for sharing your poem with us.
Love,
Inge
thanks for the lovely comments
ReplyDeleteJack,
ReplyDeleteThis poem is great! I hope you can regain this person's friendship in time for his (or her)birthday.
Your friend,
Dvid Fox
Love doesn't always end the way we hoped. You said that very well.
ReplyDeleteCaryl
Hi Jack,
ReplyDeleteI don't know what to say other than to ask "Do you read minds as well?" You could have been writing about me, it's uncanny, superb writing.
Nick
Words of great thinking Jack
ReplyDeleteKnight Writer
Dear Jack, I felt just the same and enjoyed your great poem, my friend! Sorry for my late comment, but only today I read the June poems! Lovely read!!!
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