Sometimes ...
I only want to lay down,
close my eyes, and sleep.
Turn reality into oblivion.
A fading spirit,
my inner strength falters.
Please, let me linger
in pleasant dreams,
and never return.
Your hand in mine, our tears
mingle in an unvoiced understanding.
The pain in your eyes
reflects your silent suffering.
For you, I will fight until
For you, I will fight until
I raze all barriers.
With you, I will overcome.
Inge
Wesdijk is a Dutch writer, poetess, and photographic artist who works under the
pseudonym Daginne Aignend. She likes hard rock music and fantasy books. She is
a vegetarian and spends a lot of time with her animals.
Inhe,
ReplyDeleteSo inspiring. I loved it!
Your friend,
David Fox
Thank you, David, for your kind comment.
DeleteBest wishes,
Inge
Excellent piee Inge, thanks for sharing your work with us.
ReplyDeleteThank you Peggy. I appreciate it.
DeleteBest wishes,
Inge
I know how heartfelt this beautiful poem is, my friend, & I also know that, yes, you will overcome it xxx
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, my dear frend.
DeleteLove,
Inge Xx
A sad read with a slap of reality requiring the reader to think as well as feel his way through the words. I can't find anything to fault and therefor there remains only one thing to say....Well done and God bless!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Emile, fo your kind comment. I appreciate it!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes,
Inge
Hi Inge. I enjoyed your poem. Nice uplifting tone and encouragement. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!
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(www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com)
I love your poem of shared transition!
ReplyDeleteWonderfully truthfull writing Igne,
ReplyDeleteReflects, desires of all sincere married couples. Proof to
me how we need one aonther.
Knight Writer
Hi Inge. Such a moving piece.I hope you soon find comfort and peace.Blessings.Allan.
ReplyDeleteDear Inge, I loved your poem, my friend and I pray and hope that everything will turn out well after all.
ReplyDeleteLove,
Gert
Very touching poem - from the heart.
ReplyDeleteCaryl Calsyn
Your positive attitude serves to inspire your readers, Inge. Faith and hope definitely help to keep us afloat when the sea of our life becomes too rough. Warm regards ~ paul
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