You always said, “Be Careful”
when I left the house
and I responded by acting
defiant, telling you
I wasn’t a baby that needed
to be told to be careful.
You still said, “Be Careful”
the very next time even
when I just took my
bicycle a few houses away.
“Yeah. Sure,” I
replied,
sounding cool, indifferent.
Now I understand what
you meant when you said
“Be Careful,” it’s still
your way of expressing
you love me.
(First published Skylark)
Lois Greene Stone, writer and
poet, has been syndicated worldwide. Poetry and personal essays have been
included in hard & softcover book anthologies. Collections of her
personal items/ photos/ memorabilia are in major museums including twelve
different divisions of The Smithsonian.
Hi Lois,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your poem, "Dad." I enjoyed reading it, as it brought memories back of when my dad would tell me to "be careful" of this and that situation. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!
-MJ
(www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com)
yes, sometimes it takes time to understand... lovely nostalgic write
ReplyDeleteNice work Lois, rich meaning, enjoyed it very much and I utter those same words to my kids!!
ReplyDeleteBe careful means: how much I care. A parent to a kid. me to the love of my life, very well written! Thank you, Lois, for sharing.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes,
Inge
Lois,
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem to (or in memory of) your father. Great job!
Yours truly,
David Fox
Wonderfully expressed thoughts Lois that are so true
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