We met in a silent place, as the dead lie undisturbed,
Our paths crossed and we both stood our ground.
Briefly, our eyes locked, one on the other, in a frozen
stare.
I thought I saw the glimmer of a challenge in those yellow
eyes,
Although I meant him no harm;
In this passing place, he had as much right as I.
Then turning aside, the fox slipped back into woods
And I continued down the lane.
Miranda Lloyd-Gregg
is a member of Waterfront Writers. She lives in Plymouth near the Efford
Crematorium and whilst the poem is imaginary, there are foxes in the nearby
woods.
Hi Miranda. Thank you for sharing you poem, "Down the Lane." I enjoyed the images you painted and how well-written it is. Continued blessings to you!
ReplyDelete-MJ
(www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com)
enjoyed reading this
ReplyDeleteDear Miranda,
ReplyDeleteA very vivid poem. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
Best wishes,
Inge
Dear Miranda,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the lovely comments you have already received on your poem. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here.
Blessings,
Karen
Miranda,
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem! I loved it!
Your new friend,
David Fox
I love this one... the way you wind us into your story. Well done!
ReplyDeleteVery well done - you kept the suspense going until the end.
ReplyDeleteCaryl
Miranda, you packed a lot into a few lines, and I enjoyed your poem! There are foxes near us, also. Once I saw kits as I walked the dog.
ReplyDeleteSimply a good Poem Miranda
ReplyDeleteVery foxy
Knight Writer
Interesting how animals read our body language and our intent!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for your really kind comments and encouragement
ReplyDeleteHello All
ReplyDeletethank you for your lovely comments and I want to share some exciting news with you, I have been accepted by Plymouth University to study for BA Hons English and Creative Writing next year. It is your encouragement that gave me the confidence to apply. Please keep in touch! mirandalg@live.co.uk
Dear Miranda,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations! What a big honor for you. I wish you the best with your writing.
Blessings,
Karen