Autumn Acrostic
Autumn chills all the air we inhale
Undermining the template scale
Tempting some in art of giving up
Under influence of bitterness cup
Mankind with egos & good minds
No wonder most this beauty finds
Autumn's a wonderful time of year
Carrying beautiful colors so clear
Rain bowed through out the land
Over plains, hills & rivers to band
Stirring eyesight of every heart
To inspire each man, in new start
Irrigating refreshing hope visions
Causing many mankind revisions
Yancy Lee Dalton is a published writer from Colorado.
Hi. Your acrostic is filled with color, feeling and depth. It is beautiful and touching to read. Sheri
ReplyDeleteThanks Sheri,
DeleteMy love for beauty, is hard to express, but once in a while
I strike a littl pay dirt.
Yancy
Nice imagery!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Terry, great comment
DeleteYancy
Yancy,
ReplyDeleteI know how hard it is to write an acrostic, much less a rhyming one.. Well done!
Your friend,
David Fox
Thank you David, every thing in writing is hard for me.
DeleteKeeps me full of humilty.
Yancy
Thank you, Yancy. You have painted a clear, crisp and beautiful picture of the season that I love the most. Thank you for this. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Thanks for your thoughts Maurice, I think we both see beauty through the magic eyes of God.
DeleteYancy
Awesome work..Way to go with this inspiring work..
ReplyDeleteSara
Thanks Sara, in common is the eye of the beholder, I am happy
Deletewe share this beauity.
Yancy