Whirlwind
A whirlwind twisted through the streets
and settled in a lonesome heart;
It’s rhythmic thrum of hungry lust—
a need so strong it surely must
be sated!—whirred a hectic beat,
a frantic beat, a needful beat
that could not be denied. Her heart
was stymied, twisted by the blustery
whirlwind
until it lay in tatters, hurt
beyond imagining—a hurt
so deep it left a mark that lasted
months and years. Her heart was lost—
until she felt the kicking feet
of a whirlwind….
Robert P. Hansen teaches philosophy and ethics at a community college, and he is currently finishing the second book of a fantasy series. His other three novels and collections of his poetry and short stories are currently available as e-books through various online retailers. For details, visit his blog at: http://rphansenauthorpoet.wordpress.com/.
I can see the fantasy writer coming out in this strong poem.
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Hello, Robert, I attempted to contempt a couple of times, trying again. I love your metaphor and beautiful poem. I can also see your imagination running wild in a calm and lovely setting and how just the words just flow! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net
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ReplyDeleteThe phenomenon of life love loss and hope are meshed into this well written poem.
Nice one Robert!
Bob D
I like how you word and illustrate this, Robert. I also like the style and format. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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