roof gutter
squashing the rain clouds-
sleepless night
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autumn solstice-
more coffee
than cream
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early snow-
the chrysanthemums cling on
to one another
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police drone around-
I turn off the music
of “The Thieving Magpie"
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the weather goes crook-
first snowflakes on chrysanthemums
and on your smile
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Lavana Kray is from Iasi – Romania. She is passionate about writing and photography. The nature and the events of her life are topics of inspiration. She believes that there is a core of poetry in all things. Both haiku and haiga have been published in: Haiku Canada Review, Asahi Shimbun, The Mainichi, World Haiku Association, Daily Haiga, Word Haiku Review, Haiku Presence and others… She was chosen for Haiku Euro Top 100-edition 2013. This is her blog: http://photohaikuforyou.blogspot.ro
Lovely to meet you Lavana - and I love your haiku, especially the chrysanthemums clinging to one another.
ReplyDeleteHey, Lavana! Welcome to Whispers! Love the punch lines in your Haiku and each one tells a wonderful story! Well done! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net
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ReplyDeleteYour talent is evident in your haiku. It's good to see you already have some lovely comments. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
Karen
Dear Karen, thank you so much for inviting me and for your nice words about me.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kiwis and She Sta.
It'a a real pleasure to meet you and to be part of this international journal.
Friendly regards,
Lavana
Hi Lavana. Welcome to Whispers! Thank you for the beautiful haiku. I enjoyed reading them. Continued blessings! P.S. When you get a chance, I would be grateful if you would stop by my website and consider submitting some poetry to the Creative Inspirations publication or the website. The web address is below. Thank you again and blessings!
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Thank you, Maurice, for your kind comment.
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Wonderful. well done. best wishes. Pete.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Peter. I am glad you like it.
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Lavana, I loved your very well written, picturesque Haiku. I could just feel the cold as I read of the chrysanthemums clinging to each other in the early snow. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Whispers and I am looking forward to more of your talent.
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Charlene
Thank you very much, dear Charlene !
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Lavana
Lavana,
ReplyDeleteSome good haiku you have created here. I enjoyed them very much! Welcome to Whispers!
Your new friend,
David Fox
Thank you for your friendship, David !:)
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Lavana
lovely poetry, Lavana - would you consider sending a few to bear creek haiku, po box 3787, boulder, co 80307 usa or darylayaz@me.com
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Thank you, Ayaz. I am glad you like my poems. I'll send a few to you too:)
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Thank you, Barbara Siekierski, for the following--
ReplyDeleteDetailed poems about the upcoming winter with the snow and cold. Autumn comes first.