It is a joy to
travel back into our Whispers’ archives and read gems from past
issues. When I reached, “If You’re Lucky,”
I knew this was the one for this month’s feature. I have written about titles before and their
importance. Today, our skilled writer, Maralee
Gerke, lured me in with hers. In the first three stanzas, Maralee treats us to
quiet peace of shared moments, using multi-sense imagery. With the single line fourth stanza, I felt
there was going to be change. Our poetry friend uses this line to give us
pause, to prepare for what’s ahead and gave me the sense that the message was
about to be delivered. Maralee’s last two stanzas are shared with a bit of
mystic—the loss—the time for healing.
This poem is an artistic experience. Congratulations Maralee!
Sincerely,
Karen O’Leary—Whispers’
Editor
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If
You’re Lucky
(Previously
Published at Whispers
April 13, 2013)
By
Maralee Gerke
you share the same
favorite star;
you know- the brightest one
in the center of Orion’s belt
or sit side by side
barefoot in the sand
watching waves break
on an empty beach
walk through a dusty
marketplace, holding hands,
laughing, eating figs, wrapping
yourself in vermilion silk
And if you’re very lucky
you can hold the
wounded half of your soul
in trembling arms
until it can no longer stay.
Then release it
like the whitest dove to soar,
while you, rooted to the earth
stand and watch it go.
Beautiful poem. Thoughtful and surprising imagery.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on being featured here at Whispers. Sincerely, SuZ
Very lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteHi Maralee,
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful poem,and the images you use to create the poem are memorable. Thank you for posting this lovely poem.
Congratulations, Maralee, the ending is masterful!
ReplyDeleteMaralee,
ReplyDeleteThis a great poem. Thanks to Karen for digging into the archives to find this gem!
Your friend,
David Fox
Maralee
ReplyDeleteI especially like:
"You can hold
the wounded half of your soul"
Excellent poem.
Thank you.
It's a gentle poem that seems to wrap substantial pain in a lyrical exterior. Or do I read that second half differently to the author's intent?
ReplyDeleteEnjoying all the layers to this piece. Daring to be happy. Beautiful. Best wishes Ralph.
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteI remember this one..I enjoyed reading it again..Sara
ReplyDeleteThis is truly beautiful, all the way through, but it's the final 2 stanzas that completely won me over, Maralee! Regards ... paul
ReplyDeleteThis is very hauntingly beautiful. I must thank you for making my day.
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